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**Comment Page For "The Case"**
_11/30/11
Name: themajenta11 Chapter 14 Comment: yay! no more nicole or logan!! _____________________________________________________ 11/9/2011 Name: themajenta11 Chapter 13 Comment: more nelena is next, i hope:) ______________________________________________________ 11/6/2011 Name: themajenta11 Chapter 12 Comment: seriously? he barely noticed? wow he must be blind ______________________________________________________ 11/4/2011 Name: themajenta11 Chapter 11 Comment: poor demi/tara ______________________________________________________ 11/4/2011 Name: themajenta11 Chapters 9-10 Comment: oh, it's called love <3 ______________________________________________________ 11/4/2011 Name: themajenta11 Chapter 5-8 Comment: more! ______________________________________________________ 10/31/2011 Name: themajenta11 Ch 1-4 Comment: more love,please ______________________________________________________ 10/11/2011 Name:Yesenia-joejonas025 Select Chapter Part 1: ALL Select Chapter Part 2: ALL Comment:This was one of the best stories that i have read in my entire life!! I'm serious!! They should make a movie of this. Please keep writing stories like this. Amazing!!!!! ______________________________________________________ 7/13/2011 Name: Arianna-theemrsnickjay Finale Comment: wow again! lost for words! tears in my eyes! i can honestly say i didnt really l ike this story when i first started reading it yesterday but i gave it a chance and fell in love with it!! man your writing just inspires me soooo much i wish i had your talent that you had! i wish i was a good enough writer to collab with you but your just too amazing! Absoultly speechless! dont ever stop writing! XoXo -theemrsnickjay ____________________________________________ 7/12/2011 Name: Neisha Finale Comment: This series was soo cute You should totally do something like this again since your so good at it ____________________________________________ 7/11/2011 Name: Leah(: Ch 1-4 Comment: I Love this(=your awesome!!(Y) ____________________________________________ 6/22/2011 Name: Daisy Rae Goddard Select Chapter Part 1: ALL Select Chapter Part 2: ALL Comment: Amazing! I maybe a huge Niley fan but I love to read Nelena stories! You're such a brilliant story writer!! ____________________________________________ 6/21/2011 Name: Naomi Jacobs(same as Naomi) Finale Comment:AWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!! i cant belive its OVER!!!!! I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOVVVVVVVVVVVVEEEEEEEEEEDDDDDDDD it!!!!!!!1 BEST IVE EVER READ!! ____________________________________________ 6/21/2011 Name: Naomi Chapter 15 Comment: DID NOT SEE THAT COMEING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ____________________________________________ 6/19/2011 Name: Naomi Chapter 14 Comment: WHOOOOOAAAAAA!!!!!!! I DID NOT EXPECT THAT AMAZING ________________________________________________________ 6/18/2011 Name: Naomi Chapter 5-8 Comment: im just going to be profesinal abo- OH WHO AM I KIDDING YOU R AN AWESOME WRITER (better than Stephany Myers anyway) U GO GIRL!!!!!!! Authors Reply: Wow! Thank You Sooo Much!! <3 ________________________________________________________ 6/18/2011 Name: Naomi Ch 1-4 Comment: this is one of the best most interesting stories ive read so far im sure it only gets better bottom line LOVE IT!!!!!!!! ________________________________________________________ 6/15/2011 Name: bunnymack Finale Comment: yep! it's me again. and yes i enjoyed this story about the case, and loved the way it ended. thank you.!!!! ________________________________________________________ 6/10/2011 Name: lily Finale Comment: amazing ________________________________________________________ 6/6/2011 Name: Nathan Select Chapter Part 1: ALL Select Chapter Part 2: Chapter 22 Comment: I'm a dude and all, and I thought this story would be lame considering it was my sister who recommended it...BUT, I found myself really enjoying it! You are a great writer and should definitely think about publishing a book! Congrats on the amazing work! Authors Reply: Wow! Thank You! Please Tell Your Sister Thank You! ________________________________________________________ 6/2/2011 Name: Raeanna Finale Comment: The story is over, my life is over -dies- Hey you should have another case! Just saying :D Your amazing at wtiting them! ________________________________________________________ 5/24/2011 Name: Ashlee.! (xXNickJismyDrugXx) Finale Comment: I think I may have fallen in love with you even more then I already am! lol your writing is so beautiful and precise on feelings. I wish I was as talented as you! ________________________________________________________ 5/23/2011 Name: XxfirsttimearoundxX Finale Comment: OHMYGOSHOHMYGOSHOHMYGOSH! I love you, and your writing so much! ♥♥♥ ________________________________________________________ 5/23/2011 Your Name: ricky/donna Epilogue Comment: i am glad everything ended okay and nick got better. he seem to be getting hurt but he is still a hero just like he is in the case. good job!! ________________________________________________________ 5/23/2011 Name: donna Finale Comment: i have enjoyed all of your story case. and i am glad nelena got together at the end. and the case was solved, too bad for joe and lindsey. good job! ________________________________________________________ 5/22/2011 Name: Roxanne Ch 1-4 Comment: Damn girl you have some awesome as hell videos so real like a bookk i just love them please continue for me <333333 ________________________________________________________ 5/21/2011 Name: blueberry654 Finale Comment: Aww, such a cute ending!! (the Mike and Selena part, not the Lindsey Cyrus case thing--thats not exactly cute X). I'm gonna miss this series so much!!! It was A • M • A • Z • I • N • G. Please make a second season? :D _________________________________________________________ 5/21/2011 Name: MrsEdwardCullen582 Finale Comment: yay there finally together!!!!! this was a amazing story im soo glad you decided to write :) ________________________________________________________ 5/20/2011 Name: stefanie Finale Comment: Great story!!! enjoy it very much. can't wait for the next story to come out. Haha!! i loved the way it ended. 4****. awesome!! ______________________________________________________________ 5/20/2011 Name: Toya Finale Comment: AH - MAZING! ______________________________________________________________ 5/20/2011 Name: bunnymack Finale Comment: this was so great!! i loved this story, "the case". and i liked the way it ended. too bad for lindsey, and i guess joe had to die. he was a bad character anyway, haha.!! good job!! ______________________________________________________________ 5/20/2011 Name: Sarah Finale Comment: OMG this was the most epic/insane story ever! FINALLY they confessed their love for eachother lol! ______________________________________________________________ 5/20/2011 Name: anniejenks1 Finale Comment: i loved this story it was amazing!! _______________________________________________________________ 5/21/2011 Name: blueberry654 Chapter 22 Comment: Mike is NOT dead!! Right?!?! Omg this is so sad ________________________________________________________ 5/20/2011 Name: anniejenks1 Chapter 22 Comment: no mike can't die ______________________________________________________________ 5/21/2011 Name: blueberry654 Chapter 21 Comment: Mike isn't dead, right? He's just unconscious, right?? And Joe didn't shoot Jessica, right??? Everything's going to be alright, right???? Ahhh, so many questions!!!! ________________________________________________________ 5/19/2011 Name: Suzy Select Chapter Part 1: ALL Select Chapter Part 2: ALL Comment: The finale was awesome. What other story are you doing. :) ______________________________________________________________ 5/19/2011 Name: stefanie Chapter 22 Comment: wait a minute mike can't die now when he has been thru so much. girl this is awesome!! looking forward to the next chapter. ______________________________________________________________ 5/19/2011 Name: MrsEdwardCullen582 Chapter 22 Comment: NOOOO!!! Mike Can Not Be Dead I Wont Allow It!!!! Its Not Fair He Doesn't Deserve To Die!!! ______________________________________________________________ 5/19/2011 Name: JSMELYS Chapter 22 Comment: NOOOOOOOOO WHY DO THIS TO ME.... NO DEAD MIKE PLEASE..... I REALLY LOVED IT...MORE..MORE PLEASE YOU ARE THE BEST...10000000000000000000+STARS FOR YOU ______________________________________________________________ 5/19/2011 Name: bunnymack Chapter 22 Comment: Oooohh no he can't die. somebody get in there quick. po-po are always so slow. next one soon, please!! soo great and awesome!!! ______________________________________________________________ 5/20/2011 Name: anniejenks1 Chapter 21 Comment: omg no!! ______________________________________________________________ 5/19/2011 Name: bunnymack Chapter 21 Comment: OMGEE, WHAT ______________________________________________________________ 5/20/2011 Name: anniejenks1 Chapter 20 Comment: this is getting better ______________________________________________________________ 5/19/2011 Name: blueberry654 Chapter 20 Comment: I cannot wait for the next one!! I really wish Nick and Selena would just get together already! X) ______________________________________________________________ 5/18/2011 Name: stefanie Chapter 20 (2) Comment: ohhhh, i thought they were going to get it on, so close but i am glad mike seem to be a gentlemen. he is waiting, haha!! i want to found out where is joe and the little girl too but i don't want it to end so soon. since your story is so good. GREAT job!!! ______________________________________________________________ 5/18/2011 Name: MrsEdward Cullen582 Chapter 20 (2) Comment: Soooo Good I Wish Mike Didn't Stop Them!!!! ______________________________________________________________ 5/18/2011 Name: bunnymack Chapter 20 (2) Comment: noooo! not two more chapters. it can't be ending so soon. i guess because they are so close to catching joe and his bad deeds. i want this too. by the way, you had me for a moment, with mike and selena in bed. haha!!! good one. can't wait to read the next two. ______________________________________________________________ 5/17/2011 Name: Toya Chapter 20 (2) Comment: Ahhh why they stop!!! hahaa awesome work gal! ______________________________________________________________ 5/17/2011 Name: JSMELYS Chapter 20 (2) Comment: 2 more chapters left til the end NOOOOOOOO....porque? i looved it....more..mmore ______________________________________________________________ 5/18/2011 Name: stefanie Chapter 20 (1) Comment: i told you my man bleu is cute! i hope they found that joe carter soon and the little girl. he better not hurt her. selena called mike back in the room, uh , they going to get it on? haha! can't wait to read the next chapter. amazing job.!! ______________________________________________________________ 5/18/2011 Name: bunnymack Chapter 20 (1) Comment: girl, corbin bleu look so handsome. i am sure his muscles are burging from under his shirt. and wow, finally mike and selena is gonna get it on, right? i hope they find joe carter soon! and the little girl!!! next!! ______________________________________________________________ 5/17/2011 Name: jsmelys Chapter 20 (1) Comment: OMG....what he says.... i loved it...more..more please I OBSESSED WITH THIS STORY ______________________________________________________________ 5/17/2011 Name: MrsEdwardCullen582 Chapter 20 (1) Comment: YAY Finally Good Job Selena Can't Wait To Read What Happens Next!!!!!! ______________________________________________________________ 5/19/2011 Name: anniejenks1 Chapter 19 Comment: i loved it!! ______________________________________________________________ 5/19/2011 Name: blueberry654 Chapter 19 Comment: Omg I hope they find Jessie and that she's okay!! ______________________________________________________________ 5/16/2011 Name: bunnymack Chapter 19 Comment: oooo , i am so sitting on the edge of my chair. i hope nothing happen to the little girl.but supposed he is not there or the little girl? ohhhh i am so wanting more very soon, OK! awesome! ______________________________________________________________ 5/16/2011 Name: Sarah Chapter 19 Comment: Post the next one woman! You can't leave me hanging like this lol! ______________________________________________________________ 5/16/2011 Name: MrsEdwardCullen582 Chapter 19 Comment: Omg Please Let Jessie Be Okay!! ______________________________________________________________ 5/16/2011 Name: jsmelys Chapter 19 Comment: omg...what happens fuck you joe poor selena i loved it...more...more please ______________________________________________________________ 5/16/2011 Name: stefani Chapter 19 Comment: hey girl! you know you got me on pins and needles. hey, it was so cool that Mike was there to comfort her and Mr. Banks. Cool!! more soon, OK. i want to know why the ambulance was there?!! Zac and Corbin are cute, i remember their faces.haha! ______________________________________________________________ 5/15/2011 Name: Raeanna Chapter 18 Comment: AHHHHHH!! ______________________________________________________________ 5/15/2011 Name: TOYA Chapter 18 Comment: OH SNAP!! Speechless!!! ______________________________________________________________ 5/15/2011 Name: stefanie Select Chapter Part 1:ALL Select Chapter Part 2: ALL Comment: in 18, everything seem to be topsy tubby because how could that joe person get a hold of jessie. i knew something was gonna happen when she left her in the dark room w/just a flashlight, i hop nothing happens seriously. love it. ______________________________________________________________ 5/15/2011 Name: blueberry654 Chapter 18 Comment: Oh no he didn't! He did NOT just kidnap Jessie!! >:o I cannot wait for the next episode!! Pls post soon! ______________________________________________________________ 5/15/2011 Name: Sarah Chapter 18 Comment: OMFJ!!!! I KNEW IT! The moment you stated that Jessica had blue eyes, I knew Joe was going to kidnap her!!! BUT, I didn't think it'd be so soon... :( Mike needs to come to the rescue!!! ______________________________________________________________ 5/14/2011 Name: MrsEdwardCullen582 Chapter 18 Comment: OMFG!!!!! JOE HAS HER?!?!?!?!?! I Am Honestly Speechless This Was Soo Good Please Please Please Post The Next Chapter Very Soon!!!! ______________________________________________________________ 5/14/2011 Name: anniejenks1 Chapter 18 Comment: aww shit I can't wait to read more!!! ______________________________________________________________ 5/14/2011 Name: jsmelys Chapter 18 Comment: OMG fuck you joe.... poor jessie.. i oved it...more..more please ______________________________________________________________ 5/14/2011 Name: bunnymack Chapter 18 Comment: soooo you want to drop me like this, uhhh now i got to wait . good things come to those who wait uh! this is so intense and excited. more soon, please. thanks. ______________________________________________________________ 5/15/2011 Name: blueberry654 Chapter 17 Comment: Is there really gonna be nothing between Selena and Nick? X) Anyway, amazing as always. I'm like always on the edge of my chair :) ______________________________________________________________ 5/14/2011 Name: anniejenks1 Chapter 17 Comment: I love it now all we need is nelena ______________________________________________________________ 5/14/2011 Name: bunnymack Chapter 17 Comment: i sorry lindsey, but there is no need to cry now nor run into your parents arms (uhm) and to think they must have know something strange all the time. that apartment complex look so beautiful which mike live in. i love the suspense in what gonna to happen next.!! ______________________________________________________________ 5/14/2011 Name: stefanie Chapter 17 Comment: i love it!! next. ______________________________________________________________ 5/15/2011 Name: blueberry654 Chapter 16 (3) Comment: Omg, Joe is lunatic!! That was so scary to read.. O.o ______________________________________________________________ 5/14/2011 Name: stefanie Chapter 16 (3) Comment: when i saw that haunted house, i thought it would be scary, but instead it was worst, it is a murdered house. oh so real! love it. those two are really crazy. poor tara! more please!!! ______________________________________________________________ 5/14/2011 Name: anniejenks1 Chapter 16 (3) Comment: It keeps getting better ______________________________________________________________ 5/14/2011 Name: bunnymack Chapter 16 (3) Comment: OH wow! what an intense and an amazing dramatize story. this is so carefully written out and thought. i really enjoyed it , love it. can't wait to read the others. joe is really crazy. that lindsey isn't any better!!! _______________________________________________________________ 5/13/2011 Name: anniejenks1 Chapter 16 (2) Comment: I love it. It was amazing!!! ______________________________________________________________ 5/13/2011 Name: bunnymack Chapter 16 (2) Comment: thanks for running back the time to help me understand how all of this got start in the first place on how Tara died. that joe carter is a crook. he is disgusted . lol. linsey is such a foolish person, if you know what i mean. this is so great!!/can't wait for part 3. good job.!!! ______________________________________________________________ 5/13/2011 Name: XxfirsttimearoundxX Chapter 16 (2) Comment: O________________________________O ______________________________________________________________ 5/13/2011 Name: jsmelys Chapter 16 (2) Comment: omg poor tara.... and Lindsey is so dumb i loved it..more..more please ______________________________________________________________ 5/13/2011 Name: Sarah Chapter 16 (2) Comment: OMG!!! I feel terrible for Tara!!! Lindsey is such a naive little bitch! and Joe....let me kill him? pretty pleaseeeeeeeeee??????????? ______________________________________________________________ 5/13/2011 Name: blueberry654 Chapter 16 (2) Comment: This is so intense! Can't wait for the next ones! ______________________________________________________________ 5/14/2011 Name: anniejenks1 Chapter 16 Comment: I loved it!! ______________________________________________________________ 5/13/2011 Name: bunnymack Chapter 16 Comment: lindsey' mom should have been a little harder on her. lol. maybe she wouldn't be in the mess she is in, you think. the nerve of that Joe to bring someone else in on Tara like that. what can i say, men are like woof, woof. lol. very good episode. waiting for the next one. !!!!!! ______________________________________________________________ 5/13/2011 Name: jsmelys Chapter 16 Comment: i loved it ______________________________________________________________ 5/13/2011 Name: bluberry654 Chapter 16 Comment: Something is suspicious here.. Anyway, amazing!! :) ______________________________________________________________ 5/10/2011 Name: blueberry654 Select Chapter: ALL Comment: Okay, this series totally needs to be made into a TV series or something!! Amazingness.. :) ______________________________________________________________ 5/10/2011 Name: blueberry654 Chapter 14 Comment: Whoa ; totally unexpected about the missing person case thing.. Aw, I wished they kissed haha XD ______________________________________________________________ 5/10/2011 Name: blueberry654 Chapter 13 Comment: I'm so behind on the stories X) Amazing episode as always! The Lindsey Cyrus/Tara Lovato case is really interesting!! :D ______________________________________________________________ 5/10/2011 Name: Sarah Chapter 15 Comment: OMFG Joe Carter! Kill him Mike and Selena! ______________________________________________________________ 5/9/2011 Name: anniejenks1 Chapter 15 Comment: wow AMAZING!! ______________________________________________________________ 5/9/2011 Name: anniejenks1 Chapter 14 Comment: I love this story more and more!! ______________________________________________________________ 5/9/2011 Name: XxfirsttimearoundxX Chapter 15 Comment: O_O Whoa man this is confusing... and exciting..!!! :D ______________________________________________________________ 5/9/2011 Name: TOYA Chapter 15 Comment: Oh SNAP!! lol ______________________________________________________________ 5/9/2011 Name: melys Chapter 15 Comment: i loved it ______________________________________________________________ 5/9/2011 Name: bunnymack Chapter 15 Comment: wow! i can't wait until part 2. so exciting and so ...what ? Joe again, wow he stays in trouble, uh! love the mystery. more soon.!!! ______________________________________________________________ 5/9/2011 Name: jsmelys Chapter 15 Comment: Omg joe!! More.. More please _______________________________________________________________ 5/9/2011 Name: jsmelys Chapter 14 (2) Comment: Whoa, Lindsey Cyrus is ALIVE i loved it..more..more please ______________________________________________________________ 5/8/2011 Name: stefanie Chapter 14 (2) Comment: yes it is me again, i love your pic of joe. he is sooo cute and ruggy (like a shaggy rug).ha ha! why he has to get in trouble? looking forward to the next one or ones soon. love your case stories. ______________________________________________________________ 5/8/2011 Name: bunnymack Chapter 14 (2) Comment: you see i knew this case was getting intense. and now i have to wait for you to write more, hahaha! can't wait. and thanks for as much as you gave me. where have she been? who is trying to kill her? so many questions??!! love it. it is sooo amazing. yeah, i am into it. ______________________________________________________________ 5/8/2011 Name: stefanie Chapter 14 Comment: i loved both of your chapters and loved your pics you pick out for them. Selena look so cute. and Mike look so oh man i can't describe it in words.(handsome, for now)haha!! write more. the case is getting intense. love it. ______________________________________________________________ 5/8/2011 Name: bunnymack Chapter 14 Comment: go ahead why don't you, leave me hanging, when i was getting so close to the action for everything. they look so great together! you go girl. love it. and i can't wait to see what is gonna happen with the case. who is who? so intense and exciting.!!! ______________________________________________________________ 5/8/2011 Name: Toya Chapter 14 Comment: Okay they need to go ahead and kiss already! ______________________________________________________________ 5/8/2011 Name: jsmelys Chapter 14 Comment: Omg I loved it... Kiss kiss. More more pleasse ______________________________________________________________ 5/8/2011 Name: anniejenks1 Chapter 14 Comment: It was great can't wait til the next one!! ______________________________________________________________ |
5/8/2011
Name: MrsEdwardCullen528 Chapter 14 Comment: Please Please Please Kiss They are perfect together and room service better not interrupt them ______________________________________________________________ 5/8/2011 Name: bunnymack Chapter 13 Comment: you know what, the little old lady may be a busy body but i am glad because those type of people you can learn a thing or two from them but you must be careful too, at the same time. ha ha ha!!! i like coffee too. those two(Selena & Mike)look so good together and i like the colors they have on. i like lavender... my man Olsen is a good old boy if you know what i mean, LOL!! more soon!! ____________________________________________ 5/8/2011 Name: anniejenks1 Chapter 13 Comment: I loved it ______________________________________________________________ 5/8/2011 Name: anniejenks1 Chapter 12 Comment: I loved it. It just keeps getting better!! ______________________________________________________________ 5/8/2011 Name: blueberry654 Chapter 12 Comment: amazing episode as usual :D please upload the next one super soon! ______________________________________________________________ 5/7/2011 Name: bunnymack Chapter 12 Comment: when are you going to write more? i hope very soon. thanks. __________________________________________________________ 5/6/2011 Name: jsmelys Chapter 12 Comment: i loved it...sooooooooooo much more..more please 10000000000000000000000000000000000000000+stars for you ____________________________________________________________ 5/5/2011 Name: Sarah Chapter 12 Comment: FINALLY! they're starting to fully notice eachother! YAY! lol, I'm now a nelena/melena fan rofl. _______________________________________________________________ 5/5/2011 Name: Sasha Chapter 12 Comment: YAYAYAY They Finally Caught Feelings For Each other !!!!! ______________________________________________________________ 5/5/2011 Name: jenny Chapter 12 Comment: more plz _______________________________________________________________ 5/5/2011 Name: bunnymack Chapter 12 Comment: i had this music called smooth jazz and one also called so many nights. oh my, so romantic and desirable at the same time. anyway, your story is so real.so imaginable!! also this song called new rihanna/ti. girl it is wonderful. they all musical instrumental. _________________________________________________________ 5/4/2011 Name: jenny Ch 1-4 Comment: its so cool keep going plz ______________________________________________________________ 5/3/2011 Name: TOYA Chapter 11 Comment: Nope I think I understand! Just post more!! hahahaaaaa _______________________________________________________________ 5/3/2011 Name: blueberry654 Chapter 11 Comment: Oh . Em . Gee ; This story is getting soo good !! :) Pls upload the next episode very(x2) soon ! :D ______________________________________________________________ 5/2/2011 Name: jsmelys Chapter 11 Comment: i loved it... more..more please _______________________________________________________________ 5/2/2011 Name: donna Chapter 11 Comment: Way to go! i love it. all details are fine, if i can keep up, hahaha! yes, more please, thank you. _______________________________________________________________ 5/2/2011 Name: stefanie Chapter 11 Comment: hey! i was wondering when you would write more , this case is so amazing and i get so involved with your writing until i am trying to keep up. when you explained more later, then i will see if i am right?!love this case story. like pics too. details are very good. Good job!!! ________________________________________________________________ 5/2/2011 Name: bunnymack Chapter 11 Comment: Umh... yes i need more info later but in the meanwhile, the case is getting more intense and i like the little short flirts mike and selena gets once in a while. i also like that you put 2 parts together. yes i am liking the pics you used too, haha! ps. i would like to go to Canada myself. OK!! next ones soon, thanks!! _______________________________________________________________ 5/2/2011 Name: Sarah (talentbeyondtalent) Chapter 10 Comment: Yes! She's finally noticing his sexyness! lol they should totally get it on, on the plane! ______________________________________________________________ 4/30/2011 Name: Toya Chapter 10 Comment: This was not boring! The partners are really getting close...love the details! ______________________________________________________________ 4/29/2011 Name: XxfirsttimearoundxX Chapter 10 Comment: -.- I was chanting "KISS KISS KISS!" but it didn't happen >_< ________________________________________________________________ 4/29/2011 Name: Paola AKA Miley Select Chapter: Chapters 1-4 Comment: Hey i dint get to read some chapters from this series and in the case i count find the first one oh its me Miley from OTM wats up i made new videos lol i love ya for ever!!! <3 ______________________________________________________________ 4/29/2011 Name: blueberry654 Chapter 10 Comment: Awesome episode!! I hope Nick and Selena get close soon ;) P.S. When you wanted to say, "Well I love you. We all do" in Spanish, "Pues, te amo. Nosotros hacemos" is a bit more grammatically correct. Sorry if I sound really annoying! I just thought it'd help.. ^^;; Author's Reply: Now u know i don't write grammatically correct in English, so what makes u think i will write grammatically correct in Spanish? LOL! But thanks for the info - But i'll let it stay and i'll just say she's speaking 'slang' in Spanish -hahaha! SInce it's in quotation marks it doesn't have to be exactly right =P <3 ______________________________________________________________ 4/29/2011 Name: blueberry654 Chapter 9 Comment: So thrilling!! Haha I love how mike is always about eating X) ______________________________________________________________ 4/29/2011 Name: anniejenks1 Chapter 10 Comment: I loved it!! ______________________________________________________________ 4/28/2011 Name: donna Chapter 10 Comment: hey, i have read all of your episodes together and i do enjoy them all. not boring. i just be glad when justin get out of the picture, haha!! can't wait to read the next chapters. amazing story!!! what is gonna happen in Canada? write soon, OK!! ________________________________________________________________ 4/28/2011 Name: stefanie Chapter 10 Comment: what an excited episode , i enjoyed the moments between her daughter and mother and then with mike on the airplane. not boring to me!! good job!! _______________________________________________________________ 4/28/2011 Name: bunnymack Chapter 10 Comment: no it was not boring, how will we know what an excited moment they had between each other on the plane before landing. good job!! write next one soon, thanks. _______________________________________________________________ 4/28/2011 Name: jsmelys Chapter 10 Comment: i loved it...really you are amazing more..more please _______________________________________________________________ 4/26/2011 Name: stefanie Select Chapter: Chapter 9 Comment: girl your day is sooner still you think for you is already a very good writer. look and seek and you shall receive. love your chapters.!!! ________________________________________________________________ 4/26/2011 Name: anniejenks1 Chapter 9 Comment: wow I'm speechless I completely LOVE this story. Can't wait until you are published I will deff. be buying your books. ________________________________________________________________ 4/25/2011 Name: melys Select Chapter: ALL Comment: i loved it...you are the best ______________________________________________________________ 4/25/2011 Name: jsmely Chapter 9 Comment: i loveddddd ittttttttt moreeeeeeeeeeeeee ______________________________________________________________ 4/25/2011 Name: XxfirsttimearoundxX Chapter 9 Comment: This is REALLY confusing chicka! ______________________________________________________________ 4/25/2011 Name: Sarah Chapter 9 Comment: lol I love Mike, he's so sweet and funny! _______________________________________________________________ 4/25/2011 Name: bunnymack Chapter 9 Comment: you know girl, i think this is going to work out fine with those two, or at least i hope, haha!! and for the case, boy i can't wait until the next chapters, it is getting so intensely good! ________________________________________________________________ 4/25/2011 Name: stefanie Ch 8 Pt 2 Comment: i have enjoyed both chapters good work!! waiting for the next one, soon. (i can't picture selena with justin either)hahaha!! ________________________________________________________________ 4/25/2011 Name: Donna Ch 8 pt1 Comment: oh wow, selena and justin no way, glad mike called and put a stop to it. lol!!! good job on the story. can't wait for the next one. ________________________________________________________________ 4/25/2011 Name: blueberry654 Ch 8 Pt 2 Comment: this case is getting really interesting!! can't wait for the next episode!! please upload soon! _______________________________________________________________ 4/24/2011 Name: blueberry654 Ch 8 pt1 Comment: loved it! i wish selena and mike would just get together already :D _______________________________________________________________ 4/24/2011 Name: Toya Ch 8 Pt 2 Comment: OMG! Am i wrong for saying i so could not picture that little itty boy Justin Bieber with Selena in that scene LMAO! I had to picture somebody else - But I LOVED IT!!!! Thi s is so freeaking GOOD!! ready for the next! ______________________________________________________________ 4/23/2011 Name: anniejenks1 Ch 8 Pt 2 Comment: WOW I can't wait til the next one!!! ______________________________________________________________ 4/23/2011 Name: bunnymack Ch 8 Pt 2 Comment: i like the pic of steve u. i can imagine him talking with that accent. hey, the case is getting so good. i ready for the next one soon. thanks. _______________________________________________________________ 4/23/2011 Name: bunnymack Ch 8 pt1 Comment: girl-- i got many thoughts and can't tell it all here. you go girl! love it.!!! _______________________________________________________________ 4/23/2011 Name: jsmelys Ch 8 Pt 2 Comment: i loved it..more..more please ______________________________________________________________ 4/23/2011 Name: anniejenks1 Ch 8 pt1 Comment: I loved it once again!! ________________________________________________________________ 4/23/2011 Name: blueberry654 Chapter 7 Comment: Ohemgee; So intense :O wonder who it is?!? _______________________________________________________________ 4/23/2011 Name: blueberry654 Chapter 6 Comment: this story is getting really intense and i wanna know so badly what happens next :D ______________________________________________________________ 4/23/2011 Name: blueberry654 Chapter 5 Comment: whoa, scary/intense. love this series! :) _______________________________________________________________ 4/22/2011 Name: stefanie Chapter 7 Comment: i don't know but i sure wouldn't go inside. man i would have just jump back in my car and drove off and call someone, hahahha!! ______________________________________________________________ 4/21/2011 Name: jsmelys Select Chapter:ALL Comment: i loved it... selena is a bad ass cop more..more please ______________________________________________________________ 4/21/2011 Name: Toya Chapter 7 Comment: OMG!! Please put post the next!! ______________________________________________________________ 4/21/2011 Name: XxfirsttimearoundxX Chapter 7 Comment: Selena is a bad ass cop.. *-* _______________________________________________________________ 4/21/2011 Name: Sarah Chapter 7 Comment: OMG, when you said that the shadow figure walked past her door, I freaked out lol I'm home alone at 3 am right now. (don't bother wondering why...loooong story haha) I wouldn't be surprised if it was Justin or even Mike in the living room lol _____________________________________________________________ 4/21/2011 Name: Sarah Chapter 6 Comment: damn....who the hell killed Lindsey???? I feel like I'm investigating the case as well LOL _________________________________________________________________ 4/21/2011 Name: anniejenks1 Chapter 7 Comment: I didn't think I could love this series even more than I do but you proved me wrong. I love it girl!! _______________________________________________________________ 4/21/2011 Name: anniejenks1 Chapter 6 Comment: Wow this is getting so intense I'm loving it so much more!! ________________________________________________________________ 4/20/2011 Name: jsmelys Chapter 7 Comment: i loved it..more..more ______________________________________________________________ 4/20/2011 Name:julsm7 Chapter 5 Comment: LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ______________________________________________________________ 4/20/2011 Name: julsm7 Chapter 3 Comment: YES!!!!!!!!!!!!! _______________________________________________________________ 4/20/2011 Name: julsm7 Ch 2 Comment: love it _______________________________________________________________ 4/20/2011 Name: Donna Select Chapter:ALL Comment:girl, i just love them all. so excited in many ways. you are so creative and amazing writer.( i don't know who it could be). but i can't wait to find out in next chapters. lol!! _________________________________________________________________ 4/20/2011 Name: bunnymack Chapter 7 Comment: i don't know, is it a robber or some--- i don't know. i just hope she don't get hurt too bad. love it. but i don't like it when you freeze me too, from knowing what is going to happen next. lol!!i am glad the little girl wasn't there. looking forward to next chapter soon. OK!! _________________________________________________________________ 4/20/2011 Name: TheDopeyMusic Chapter 6 Comment: aaaaaaah taylor is an acoholic !? and wats he talkin bout so called friends? and ohmygod this just gets better and better ! lmao he tried to lick selena's lips and called her super chick ! lmfao poor sel and mike must be tired and ohmygod im dying to know wats goin on and wats gonna happen ! and aaaaah soooo amazing !! cant wait for nelena !! post moore pleeasE :DD <3333 _______________________________________________________________ 4/20/2011 Name:bunnymack Chapter 6 Comment: i like the credits and i like those pics. you really do good work. taylor lowry name reminds me of mike lowry name on cops! haha.love this story. can't wait to read the next one.(hey, was she speaking spanish)? haha, love it. _______________________________________________________________ 4/20/2011 Name: XxfirsttimearoundxX Select Chapter: Chapter 5 Comment: You have no idea how in love with this I am! _________________________________________________________________ 4/19/2011 Name: Donna Chapter 5 Comment: I like your scene and love the plot. good job! do more soon, OK!! ________________________________________________________________ 4/19/2011 Name: Toya Chapter 5 Comment: Oh Wow! Very Interesting!! Looking forward to the next!! ________________________________________________________________ 4/18/2011 Name: melys Chapter 5 Comment: i loved it..more..more ______________________________________________________________ 4/18/2011 Name: anniejenks1 Chapter 5 Comment: omg this just keeps getting better!! _________________________________________________________________ 4/18/2011 Name: TheDopeyMusic Chapter 5 Comment: aaaaaaaaaaaaah mike is such a sweetie ! and selena can be a bitch but i feel bad for her but she needs to move on and work with mike. mike was so sweet wit robby :D and im freakin looovin this story ! its soo real and wooow ! amazing !! post more soon pleeease :DD <3333 _______________________________________________________________ 4/18/2011 Name: bunnymack Chapter 5 Comment: oh wow! this story is just like a crime picture on tv. i can see everything in details including the face expressions of the detectives and the lieutenant and others. the little boy too. especially the image of the dead body. excellent job!! _______________________________________________________________ 4/17/2011 Name: blueberry654 Select Chapter: Chapter 4 Comment: LOVED it!! :) ps. in the last paragraph, you said "mark" twice instead of "mike" lol sorry haha. _______________________________________________________________ 4/17/2011 Name: Donna Select Chapter: Chapter 4 Comment: Oh wow! you know what i just love it. next please, thanks. _______________________________________________________________ 4/17/2011 Name: Toya Chapter 4 Comment: Loved it! Really Good Stuff _______________________________________________________________ 4/16/11 Name: anniejenks1 Chapter 4 Comment: I loved it I cant wait til the next one!! _________________________________________________________________ 4/16/11 Name: bunnymack Chapter 4 Comment: it is not boring, this all in detective work and when this happen go with the flo , all details must be considered. this is why it is so good. i too, think Haley is holding back. they all know something, OK!! love it. _________________________________________________________________ 4/15/2011 Name: melys Chapter 4 Comment: more..more i loved it _______________________________________________________________ 04/13/2011 Name: Toya Chapter 3 Comment: Something aint right with that mom...i like it! haha ________________________________________________________________ 04/13/2011 Name: bunnymack Chapter 3 Comment: loved the pics you pick. good ones. ________________________________________________________________ 04/13/2011 Name: bunnymack Chapter 3 Comment: must admit this story is so amazing good. the case is going to be extraordinary and i do love to read especially these type of stories (scary ones too, haha) by the way, the mom seems like a typical rich woman who seams to be scare of something, or whatever humm! but dad seems cool.good job! ________________________________________________________________ 04/13/2011 Name: anniejenks1 Chapter 3 Comment: Yeah the parents were way to suspicious!! _______________________________________________________________ 04/13/2011 Name: blueberry654 Chapter 3 Comment: amazing episode!! :) _______________________________________________________________ 04/13/2011 Name: blueberry654 Ch 2 Comment: loved it! would it kill selena to be nice to nick? ;) ______________________________________________________________ 04/12/2011 Name: jsmelys Chapter 3 Comment: i loved it _______________________________________________________________ 04/12/2011 Name: Sarah Chapter 3 Comment: The mom was suspicious....this is an awesome story, so interesting and intense. I'm hooked! Keep up the amazing work! ________________________________________________________________ 04/12/2011 Name: XxfirsttimearoundxX Ch 1 Comment: O_O I'm in love with this story ALREADY! ________________________________________________________________ 04/11/2011 Name: Toya Ch 1 Comment: Girrrrl Why u didn't tell me u put this out! I LOVE IT! ________________________________________________________________ 04/11/2011 Name:Donna Select Chapter:ALL Comment: i loved them both. great job. _______________________________________________________________ 04/11/2011 Name: MrsEdwardCullen582 Ch 2 Comment: Awesome Can't Wait Till Mike Get Through Her Wall And They Start Dating :) ______________________________________________________________ 04/10/2011 Name:anniejenks1 Ch 2 Comment: I loved how much of a bitch Selena is. Can't wait til the next one!!! ______________________________________________________________ 04/10/2011 Name: blueberry654 Ch 1 Comment: i loved it! good beginning! :) _______________________________________________________________ 04/10/2011 Name: anniejenks1 Ch 1 Comment: I loved it, I can't wait to see what you have in store for us in this story, I just know its gonna be amazing!! ______________________________________________________________ 04/10/2011 Name: bunnymack Ch 2 Comment: forgot to mention the food, very tasty and yes my man do eat, but it is normal for a guy, lol!!f _______________________________________________________________ 04/10/2011 Name: bunnymack Ch 2 Comment: as always, amazing story and it is getting so interest . next one soon, please. _______________________________________________________________ 04/10/2011 Name: bunnymack Ch 1 Comment: this story is so amazing and i do like to read good story and this is very good can't wait to read the next chapters. ______________________________________________________________ 04/10/2011 Name: jsmelys Select Chapter: Chapter 2 Comment:i loved it ______________________________________________________________ 04/10/2011 Name:melys Ch 2 Comment: more more ______________________________________________________________ 04/10/2011 Name: melys Ch 1 Comment: loved it..more.more..please ________________________________________________________________ 04/10/2011 Name:Sarah (talentbeyondtalent) Ch 1 Comment: this is so cool! It's soooo NOT boring! I love it. btw, Justin seems like an ass lol and Denzel seems so sweet, it's sad that he's dead :( __________________________________________________________________ 04/10/2011 Name: Msmoviemakergirlify Ch 1 Comment: Loved it! I love Selena and her daughters relationship! |
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